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Page 4 – Hitting the Street

Alright, got some issues worked out and it’s back to the grind. The next couple pages have already been laid out, and I’ve got plenty of story to go, so hopefully there won’t be many more extended delays like this last one. Tough to say for sure though.

As always, any feedback or criticism is welcome, and I’ve got the artist notes down below for those of you who like that sort of thing.

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I’d struggled a lot with this comic. Not sure if it’s noticeable that I’ve drawn the last panel quite a while after the rest of the comic. I’d been really unhappy with how my art was progressing up to this point, and I almost scrapped this comic and started off in an entirely different direction, but then I calmed down and decided to keep rolling, and let the art work itself out. Should be an interesting next few pages from a technical standpoint (and hopefully the story works out too.)
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5 thoughts on “Page 4 – Hitting the Street”

  1. it looks appropriately ghostly… it needs more broken-down environments a la the gamecube remake of Resident Evil.

    also, if I’m working on a comic based on 4.5 x 14″ and I want the width to be 16″, what does the height become? thnx

  2. @Tyler Durden: Yeah, the crowbar is a great multi-tasker in the PA world.

    @Doug: Thanks!

    @Peter: Thanks! I’m working on the environments a little more with each strip. As far as sized go – if you want an exact size, you can do the math on that (16/14=the number you’ll want to multiply 4.5 by) but I’d suggest just picking a height based on what works for you, whether it’s 5″ or 6″ or whatever.

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